DemiseAnimation's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MadSeth 4: Foreordination]

Compelling With Lots Of Energy

Your humour and ideas are great, especially loved the elavator scene.
If you keep this up you could get really good.

One thing that was lacking was high quality animation, it was still enjoyable, but not the best.

Well done 5/5 9/10

Rapheus responds:

I started it in 2007, (I think) so the the further we get through the animation, the better it gets. I've been practicing.

[Entertainment]

It was alright

But most of it was just motion tweens, I like the way you added that texture in over the top for the effect but some of it (Especially the end) was poorly animated.

Try working on something frames per second mate ;), its great practice especially to get away from just move things youve drawn around

akoRn responds:

try to see some of my other work. u'll see that I can make fbf, no problem. Juz exploring a new part of animation, givin value and versatile feeling to it. Seem working. Now to find a good way to mix the versatile n fbf. thx for the concern

[Super Zombie World Part 1]

Good, but needs improvement.

Good (and probably to the best of your abilities) but there are still some improvements.

1. Add subtitles
2. All the white boxes on walls and such, should be transparent. It would make it look much better
3. All your text isnt that great to be honest, im sure you were trying to get a zombie effect (??) but you can get much better texts at several different fonts.
http://www.dafont.com/
4. It froze on the part with the board talking to the goomba, check that out for me
5. Scene select? If you cant figure out the freezing thing this would be very helpful.

Probably some more I could pick out if it didnt freeze ;), im sure this would have a much larger score if you did the improvements listed.

MurderMysteryMan responds:

I'll probably add subtitles next time. Freezing? That's terrible! I'm not sure why it would happen; it didn't happen to me. I'll consider scene select. Thank you :)

[Planetoid - Chapter 1]

Oh Man

Very nice and everything man but you could of improved that space ship taking off scene just a little bit?

Much hearts, animation was great when it looked like you tried and the storyline is intriuging

Fate responds:

Yeah, we don't talk about the take-off scene.

[Rose And The Stem: Part 1]

Talking Like This

Really Pisses Me Off, Please Change It As It Just Makes You Look Retarded.

BatdanTheDarkKnight responds:

Wow, Thanks For Your Crit On The Flash =] Its Invaluable.
And I Think I'll Keep "Talking" Like This Because Its How I Like To 'Type' Alright. Only One Who Looks Foolish Here Is You.

[Crappy FBF]

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Learn what one is

sixflab responds:

You know there actually is one on there. I imported it wrong but you can get over it. It's three years old.